bitter pilgrims
dry mold pathways
sand shimmers
mecca beckons
overhead oasis threatens
absolution
heathen's mistress
kneel
before the black stone
pray forgiveness
weep
surrender
children hurl ice frozen cubes
past the MickeyD's
waiting for tourists
but these ice chips want blood
6 comments:
*runs away*
*runs back*
Oh this is very intriguing, you. I am liking the short sharp lines and images within make for a interesting read. Well done, you.
what a contrast... beautifully described. ove the 'threatens absolution'
Hi,
Thanks for visiting my garden!
Your poetry is beautiful. Hope your finals are going well.
Sarah :)
Powerfully written. An undertone
of surreal anger.
Surreal anger...and deep disappointment.....Well written
Linda
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